1. Emphasis on the intercourse of the plant's "stem" into model's labia and vaginal opening. 2. Use the sound of the "head" popping/sliding in as sound effect later on, amplified to describe the sound of the "birth" during the fade to black close up. 3. Could you maybe get this wet?. It's just it could be one of those erotic horror things, where something affects the heroine's body. What i'm thinking is the plant exerts pheromones that make you get wet before even taking the shaft inside you. 4.Could you be a bit hairy? It sort of adds another layer to spread open down ... Show more