Sahara Skye voiced a mostly positive reaction to Lilly Bell's manuscript but suggested that the plot might be improved by a more exciting scene for the two detective partners. She asked Lilly to visualize the novice investigators caught while attempting to collect evidence, then sitting bound, blindfolded and struggling next to each other. Before long, the blindfolds disappeared but cloth gags spread their lips; courageous efforts to free themselves led to their breasts being bared and shoes removed.