"First part (camera 3rd PV). Vanessa is in her place getting ready to go out. She is checking herself in the mirror making sure everything looks good before going out. All of the sudden, she has a weird feeling of someone watching her. She turns around and looks around the room. Then slowly walks to a drawer, opens it and takes out her stake. She continues searching her place with a guarded stance. She declares that she knows someone is in her place and demands him comes out. Lalo comes out of his hiding place. They circle each other. Vanessa is ready to fight while he seems relaxed...
"First part (camera 3rd PV). Vanessa is in her place getting ready to go out. She is checking herself in the mirror making sure everything looks good before going out. All of the sudden, she has a weird feeling of someone watching her. She turns around and looks around the room. Then slowly walks to a drawer, opens it and takes out her stake. She continues searching her place with a guarded stance. She declares that she knows someone is in her place and demands him comes out. Lalo comes out of his hiding place. They circle each other. Vanessa is ready to fight while he seems relaxed. She asks why did he come here? He replies that he is here to claim her as his bride. She chuckles at his audacity and tells him that he made a big mistake coming to her place and soon will pay dearly. He responds with slight grin. Vanessa attacks him with the stake, trying to push it at his heart. He easily catches her arm and holds it tight. She struggles to free her arm but his grip is too strong. He squeezes her arm hard until she let go of the stick. She tries to hit him with her other hand but he catches it too. Now Lalo is holding both her arms. She struggles violently to free herself from his clutches to no avail. She looks at him with shock and asks who he is. Lalo then twisted her arms around her back and holds them securely with one hand (face to face, camera facing both their sides). Grabs a handful of Vanessa’s hair and roughly pull her head to the side (toward the camera’s direction). Then tells her soon she will be calling him master. He violently sinks his teeth into her neck. She lets out a sharp scream as he bites her neck. She moans the word “no” as he feeds until she is completely weakened. He stops when she is completely devoid of any energy to resist him. He let go of her arms and wrap his arms around her lower back and keeps her up standing for a little as she hang her head backwards barely awake. He lifts her up in his arms while she's completely void of energy and softly moaning. He walks off with her in his arms to his layer. Second part (camera Lalo’s POV). The scene starts with Vanessa lying on her back in bed in his layer. (bed should only have white sheet covering the mattress and nothing else. No pillows and no blanket). Lalo climbs the bed from her feet crawling to her face. She is very weak to do anything other than moan softly. He eyes slightly opened looking at Lalo. He gently caresses her face and neck. Then moves down to her breast and fondles them. Lalo (camera) goes back to looking at her face as he prepare to fuck her. She lets out a loud moan as he pushes his dick inside her. He thrusts in and out of her while looking at her face. She squirms under him in agony as he fuck. She tosses and turns her head as she gets fucked. The the camera switches to 3rd person view as Lalo grabs a handful of her hair and bites her neck. He sucks on her while fucking her. He growls as he finally cums insides her. Then he gets off of her as she pass away."
