The times listed are just rough suggestions as to how longI’d prefer each section to last relative to each other, but please adjust asyou feel necessary. If you could try to keep a lot of your body in the frame as much as possible throughout the different angles that would be amazing. Also as a side note, if you could use the word stomach over words like belly/tummy primarily I would love that! Finally the two lines in quotes near the end are the only things I’d ask for you to say as close as you can to in the script,other than that please add/ say anything you come up with to make it feel ... Show more