The Scenario:
Blue jeans cuffed at ankle
Suntan pantyhose reinforced toe
Brown loafers
Long sleeve shirt
Footwell light on
No ponytail

"Mandie Runs Out of Gas."

She empties a big can of 93 octane in the tank. She also keeps periodically getting creepy texts from an anonymous texter.
She gets in the car pumps the living hell out of the accelerator twists the key and no catch. She keeps cranking and pumpin but the motor seems to just seems to give her the raspberries. She seems nervous by both the motor and the texts. After several attem...

The Scenario:
Blue jeans cuffed at ankle
Suntan pantyhose reinforced toe
Brown loafers
Long sleeve shirt
Footwell light on
No ponytail

"Mandie Runs Out of Gas."

She empties a big can of 93 octane in the tank. She also keeps periodically getting creepy texts from an anonymous texter.
She gets in the car pumps the living hell out of the accelerator twists the key and no catch. She keeps cranking and pumpin but the motor seems to just seems to give her the raspberries. She seems nervous by both the motor and the texts. After several attempts she stops to chill.

She takes her Samsung galaxy to call TINSLEY but stops thinking out loud that she will laugh at her so she calls her boyfriend but US CELLULAR has a message saying the phone is off or out of coverage area.

She goes back to cranking and pumping. She feels a little nervous and knows a huge rainstorm is on the way. She stops after 2 long attempts to slide off her brown loafers. She rubs her feet together to relax them and tries pumpin and cranking in her stocking feet. She tries one last attempt. She pumps it a dozen times twists the key pumps it a few times and then VAR0000M! Chuga-chuga-chuga it starts! She feels S0 relieved. She slides her right loafer back on and revs it to make sure it don't stall and as the PTP logo starts to come up she is begging the car please don't stall please don't stall!

Try to get some backseat over the shoulder focus to leg well and passenger seat leg well like the outtake video posted on YouTube.
No profanity!
Maybe a close up of her hand twisting the key
Also a few long cranks and some pump and grind of the accelerator
And facial expressions of nervousness